My heart throbs as it never had before,
Ever since you waled right out of the door.
There’s this huge gaping hole inside my heart,
Ever since you tore both of us apart.
And all the days that I shall face alone,
I’ll live these days with a heart turned to stone.
My soul’s restless searching for only you;
After you, my dreams have never come true.
My mind is traveling a lonely space,
So much to wander but no friendly face
And all these nights that leave me feeling cold,
Without your love, without your hand to hold.
Where are you? I have searched for you, lost one.
Come back to me, and bring back in the sun.
~~~~~
I am very honored to be an awardee again for the Perfect Poet Award. Lord knows how much prestige it gives one poet. We all do our best to write the best and most thought-provoking or emotional poems we can ever come up with. We do this every week. We scour the blogging community to show our support to the other poets who go through the same process of creating a poem.
I have always loved poetry. I know that this is where I fit right in. I want to thank Jingle for the constant support that she has shown to all the poets. I also want to congratulate all the participants for a job well done. I want to pass my award on to William. His dedication to poetry is inspiring. Someday, I wish to accomplish the same things as he has now. wink
Comments (26)
Jingle
May 13, 2010 at 9:21 pm
this poem may be one of your best,
love the sound of your words.
everything is PERFECT!
THANKS FOR THE CONTRIBUTION!
hope that you enjoy the visits to fresh poets this week.
cheers!
ishabelle
May 13, 2010 at 9:27 pm
thanks jingle… i am in the process of visiting my favorite poets and the new ones as well.. 🙂 this is the highlight of my Thursdays… 🙂
Jingle
May 13, 2010 at 10:21 pm
cool you,
u make my day!
😉
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anthonynorth
May 13, 2010 at 10:09 pm
This flowed beautifully. Nicely done.
leilajm
May 13, 2010 at 11:13 pm
Me encanto tu poema.
Saludos
trisha
May 13, 2010 at 11:13 pm
This is a masterpiece ishabelle. you are awesome.
congratulations for the well deserved award.
brian
May 13, 2010 at 11:31 pm
bring back the sun…puts a great point on the emotions in this one…
Rajlakshmi
May 14, 2010 at 3:20 am
//Come back to me, and bring back in the sun.// aww that is so so touching….
well written..
congratzz on the award …
william
May 14, 2010 at 3:34 am
awe Ishbelle, what a lovely poem and hey I am honoured to have u nominate me, how kind, your poetry amazes me, u write very nice work xx
doubtfulpoet
May 14, 2010 at 4:25 am
Isha this was amazing!! I’m sorry I haven’t been around for a while but I’ve been trying to read your posts! Going to get back into the rhythm of writing daily now lol <3<3 You rocked it girl, such deep emotion.
Neeraj Bhushan
May 14, 2010 at 10:49 am
The posts are amazing. Rich content. It was good to visit you. Keep singing.
Ji
May 15, 2010 at 1:19 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/14/week-18-the-perfect-poet-award-announcement/
you are perfect on week 18…
cheers!
😉
keerthana
May 15, 2010 at 1:29 am
Great poem!
Jingle
May 15, 2010 at 11:17 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/15/poetry-award-for-week-18-thursday-poets-rally/
Three awards for poetry,
the most honest poet award,
the most open minded poet award,
the most intelligent poet award,
two general awards,
the big heart award,
you are the princess snow-white award.
Hope that you enjoy these 5 award.
Happy Weekend!
Smiles!
bryan
May 15, 2010 at 1:24 pm
Hey there! This is bryan from Jingle (a.k.a. secretbasketofeggs)
Excellent site, I really like the sand header picture.
-bryan
Achyut Telang
May 15, 2010 at 4:22 pm
A small but beautiful poem!
Jingle
May 17, 2010 at 9:54 pm
Nice to see you.
Jingle
May 17, 2010 at 9:54 pm
http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-follower-award-week-3.html
Happy Monday!
Friendship awards 4 u.
trisha
May 18, 2010 at 10:12 pm
no poem or posts since thursday? 🙁
fiveloaf
May 18, 2010 at 11:22 pm
you deserved it for trying so hard.. seems to me the current trend is using the word sun hehe..
Short Poems
May 19, 2010 at 2:40 am
Beautiful poem, full of emotions.
doubtfulpoet
May 19, 2010 at 3:32 am
Ow Isha I re read this one it’s so lovely!!
Jingle
May 19, 2010 at 1:55 pm
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/14/week-18-the-perfect-poet-award-announcement/
week 18 perfect poet award reminder,
many thanks.
Doraz
May 24, 2010 at 9:17 am
You do have a very impressive style of writing. 🙂 CONGRATS to you.
Jingle
June 6, 2010 at 10:53 am
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/06/lets-send-love-2-viola-and-ibok-today/
Please help send hugs and good wishes to Viola and Ibok…
thanks a ton!
🙂